Tuesday, June 11, 2013

Dove
(original poem 4 - freeverse)


A troop of soldiers moves silently through the underbrush
guns impatiently quake in their gloved hands
heavy breathing
sweat drips down into their eyes

A sudden bang causes them to halt
anticipation
anxiety
all hold their breath

The leader makes a quick signal and they jump
running quickly
"forward, forward!"
no time to think

They reach a clearing, the ground littered with 
bodies
remains of an explosive smoke up from the ground
there is nobody left

Several soldiers fall to their knees
weapons hang loosely at side

A single white dove flies over the masses
it lets out a cry and soldiers look up

The bird soars and soars until it flies into the trees 
never to be seen again

The soldiers pick themselves up
Tomorrow will be a better day
Maybe it will all end tomorrow




Explanation:

This a poem about a war. It is freeverse and has no rhyme scheme. On line 2 there is an example of personification because guns do not have emotions and cannot be impatient. The dove mentioned is symbolism for peace during times of war.





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