Friday, June 7, 2013

   Beach Day
 (original poem 1- sonnet)


The ocean waves crash
Roughly against the shore
Rocks tumble and smash
There is silence no more

Crabs scuttle through the sand
Seagulls search for their prey
Children run, fall and land
It is just another beach day

Ice cream falls and babies cry
Lifting rocks, poking holes
Kites soar and frisbees fly
People smile, happy souls

Families clean up and leave the beach
Nature is a lesson no school can teach




Explanation:

The topic of this poem is about families going to the beach and playing in the sand and enjoying the outdoors. It is a sonnet, that has 4 stanzas and a rhyme scheme of ABAB CDCD EFEF GG. "Families clean up and leave the beach" on line 13 is an example of assonance. The first stanza contains imagery.

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