Wednesday, June 12, 2013


-Annie Hall's Poetry Assignment -

Contains:

Collected Poems x5 + Reviews
Original Poems x5 + Explanations

(also click older posts to see all 10 poems) 

:)
Cicada
by Basho
(collected poem 5)

In the cicada's cry
No sign can foretell
How soon it must die




Review:

This is a poem about a cicada, that has no idea when it will die. It has the familiar 5-7-5 syllable form of a haiku. "cicada's cry" is alliteration. The first and last lines rhyme!
Eros Turannos
by Edwin Arlington Robinson
(collected poem 4) 

She fears him, and will always ask
   What fated her to choose him;
She meets in his engaging mask                  
   All reasons to refuse him;
But what she meets and what she fears
Are less than are the downward years,
Drawn slowly to the foamless weirs
   Of age, were she to lose him.

Between a blurred sagacity
   That once had power to sound him,
Love and God, will not let him be.
   The seeker that she found him,
Her pride assuages her, almost,
As if it were alone the cost.
He sees that he will not be lost,
   And waits, and looks around him.

A sense of ocean and old trees
   Envelops and allures him;
Tradition, touching all he sees
   Beguiles and reassures him;
And all her doubts of what he says
Are dimmed with what she knows of days,
Till even prejudice delays,
   And fades—and she secures him.

The falling leaf inaugurates
   The reign of her confusion;
The pounding wave reverberates
   The crash of her illusion;
And home, where passion lived and died,
Becomes a place where she can hide,—
While all the town and harbor side
   Vibrate with her seclusion.

We tell you, tapping on our brows,
   The story as it should be,—
As if the story of a house
   Were told, or ever could be;
We’ll have no kindly veil between
Her visions and those we have seen,—
As if we guessed what hers have been
   Or what they are, or would be.

Meanwhile, we do no harm; for they
   That with a god have striven,
Not hearing much of what we say,
   Take what the god has given;
Though like waves breaking it may be,
Or like a changed familiar tree,
Or like a stairway to the sea,
   Where down the blind are driven.

Review:
    This poem is an example of a ballad. It has 6 stanzas with 8 lines, an octet. The poem     has four-stress lines and the stanzas rhyme ABABCCCB. It is about a couple who has a rocky relationship behind closed doors and the theme is love and hate. "Love and God." is an allusion because it mentions God, a holy figure. The repeated mentions about the ocean, and waves is symbolism for how the woman feels inside. It could also partly be foreshadowing, like the last line suggests, that the woman will drown herself in the sea.
The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock
by T.S Elliot
(collected poem 3)


The winter evening settles down
With smell of steaks in passageways.
Six o'clock.
The burnt-out ends of smoky days.
And now a gusty shower wraps
The grimy scraps
Of withered leaves about your feet
And newspapers from vacant lots;
The showers beat
On broken blinds and chimney-pots,
And at the corner of the street
A lonely cab-horse steams and stamps.
And then the lighting of the lamps.
Let us go then, you and I, 
When the evening is spread out against the sky
   A patient etherised upon a table; 

Let us go, through certain half-deserted streets,
The muttering retreats
Of restless nights in one-night cheap hotels
And sawdust restaurants with oyster-shells


Review:

The theme of this poem is despair and gloom. A man is taking someone out to the city but is very dreary and there is not much happiness. The rhyme scheme is not exact, but there are several rhyming couplets in the freeverse. Due to the fact that the poem is freeverse it does not have exact structure but it  sometimes shows iambic pentameter. This poem contains a lot of imagery, describing the smells, feels, and sights of the world the poem is in. "With smell of steaks in passageways." is a combination of alliteration and assonance. "A patient etherised upon a table" is a metaphor, there is no actual patient, it just comparing that situation to the evening sky.
Ballad of the Cool Fountain
by Anonymous 
(collected poem 2 - ballad)



Fountain, coolest fountain,  
Cool fountain of love,
Where all the sweet birds come
For comforting-but one,
A widow turtledove,
Sadly sorrowing,
At once the nightingale,
That wicked bird, came by,
And spoke these honied words:
"My lady, if you will,
I shall be your slave."
"You are my enemy:
Begone, you are not true!"
Green boughs no longer rest me,
Nor any budding grove.
Clear springs, where there are such,
Turn muddy at my touch.
I want no spouse to love
Nor any children either.
I forego that pleasure and their comfort too.
No, leave me; you are false
And wicked-vile, untrue!
I'll never be your mistress!
I'll never marry you!







  Review: 

This poem is a ballad about a fountain who is angry with a nightingale. It expresses the emotions of the fountain, which is personification. "Sadly sorrowing"on line 6 is an example of alliteration. There is no definite rhyme scheme or structure. It is written in dactyl hexameter.
Sonnet VII
by William Shakespeare
(collected poem 1 - sonnet)



Lo! in the orient when the gracious light
Lifts up his burning head, each under eye
Doth homage to his new-appearing sight,
Serving with looks his sacred majesty; 
And having climbed the steep-up heavenly hill,
Resembling strong youth in his middle age,
Yet mortal looks adore his beauty still,
Attending on his golden pilgrimage:
But when from highmost pitch, with weary car,
Like feeble age, he reeleth from the day,
The eyes, 'fore duteous, now converted are
From his low tract, and look another way:
   So thou, thyself outgoing in thy noon
   Unlooked on diest unless thou get a son.


Review:

The sonnet is about a sunset being compared to a man's age. The theme is that the rise and fall of the sun is the same as a man is, starting young and growing old. It has a rhyme scheme of ABAB CDCD EFEF GG. It has 3 quatrains and a couplet, with iambic pentameter. The whole poem is a simile because it is a comparison. It also contains rhyme. The sun is reffered to as "his" and has actions which is an example of personification.

Tuesday, June 11, 2013

Sloths
(original poem 5 - couplets/rhyming)

Sometimes I think that I could be a sloth
Hang from a tree and not do a lot

Sleep all day and eat all night
Nobody ever picks a fight

Go to the bathroom once a week
Leaves more time for me to eat

Favourite foods are leaves, twigs and fruit
makes it so that lunch is always a hoot

My head could turn 90 degrees
easier access for munching on leaves

I would always have a smiling face,
creepy or not it cannot be erased

Not very much muscle mass, mostly just claws
I would still hang on when dead, that deserves applause

But I remain a human, stuck on the ground
If I were a sloth I could just lie around




Explanation:
  
This is clearly a poem about sloths! It is written in rhyming couplets. The first line of the second couplet is alliteration, "Not very much muscle mass, mostly just claws."