Tuesday, June 11, 2013

Dove
(original poem 4 - freeverse)


A troop of soldiers moves silently through the underbrush
guns impatiently quake in their gloved hands
heavy breathing
sweat drips down into their eyes

A sudden bang causes them to halt
anticipation
anxiety
all hold their breath

The leader makes a quick signal and they jump
running quickly
"forward, forward!"
no time to think

They reach a clearing, the ground littered with 
bodies
remains of an explosive smoke up from the ground
there is nobody left

Several soldiers fall to their knees
weapons hang loosely at side

A single white dove flies over the masses
it lets out a cry and soldiers look up

The bird soars and soars until it flies into the trees 
never to be seen again

The soldiers pick themselves up
Tomorrow will be a better day
Maybe it will all end tomorrow




Explanation:

This a poem about a war. It is freeverse and has no rhyme scheme. On line 2 there is an example of personification because guns do not have emotions and cannot be impatient. The dove mentioned is symbolism for peace during times of war.





Baby
(original poem 3 - haiku)


sleeps on a blanket
she is a beautiful rose
chest rises and falls


Explanation:

This haiku is about a sleeping baby. It has 3 lines with a syllable count of 5,7,5. The second line is a metaphor because the baby is not actually a plant. 

   Dog and Frog
 (original poem 2- ballad)



Once upon a time there was a frog

He lived with his best friend, a dog
They were sick of their boring lives

They picked up and left a letter
"We are going and leaving for the better"
Put it in an envelope for their wives

The pair went adventuring off the city
they bustled like bees and it was pretty
until they met two men with knives

"Good God, look at these creatures"
"We could sell their coats to dealers"
Dog is caught but Frog survives.




Explanation:

This is a poem about two animals who leave their homes and then run into men who sell animal fur. For some reason I gave it a gruesome end. It is a ballad with 4 stanzas with 3 lines each.  The rhyme scheme is AAB CCB DDB EEB. In the last stanza, the first line has an allusion with "Good God.." Third stanza, second line contains a simile comparing the two animals to bees. The whole poem contains rhyming.

Friday, June 7, 2013

   Beach Day
 (original poem 1- sonnet)


The ocean waves crash
Roughly against the shore
Rocks tumble and smash
There is silence no more

Crabs scuttle through the sand
Seagulls search for their prey
Children run, fall and land
It is just another beach day

Ice cream falls and babies cry
Lifting rocks, poking holes
Kites soar and frisbees fly
People smile, happy souls

Families clean up and leave the beach
Nature is a lesson no school can teach




Explanation:

The topic of this poem is about families going to the beach and playing in the sand and enjoying the outdoors. It is a sonnet, that has 4 stanzas and a rhyme scheme of ABAB CDCD EFEF GG. "Families clean up and leave the beach" on line 13 is an example of assonance. The first stanza contains imagery.